Hell yes

Dude you should definetly keep working on this! It was over and I was like why does it end >_<

You better finish and upload it!

not bad!

Pretty good! Like your comment about it aswell. It could use a lower male chorus in it i think, would sound pretty nice I gues cause right now there is no base or lower sound at all. Over all good work!

long review but i hope it helps!

ok im going to give you some tips here. i think your kind of new to fruity loops as i can hear you use alot of pre-samples.

first of all. try useing the sytrus pad. put acid 8 on go to the channel settings and put the apreggiator on. this will get u nice trippy tunes.
use a fruity kick with and parametic EQ to get that psytrance kick.
im not all that into psytrance but that should help you a bit. making your own melody will give the song alot more of your feeling to it.
so give it a try and let me know when ur next song is up!